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1 Valiance Ayatsu on Fri Feb 12, 2016 8:28 pm

Valiance Ayatsu



   Love is a powerful thing.


Name(s): Valiance Ayatsu
Nickname(s): Ayatsu
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Birthday: February 10th
Sexuality: Bisexual
Rank: D
Guild: Guildless
Tattoo: Back of Neck
Face Claim: N/A


Height: 5'11"
Weight: 157lbs
Hair: Silver
Eyes: Azure
Description: A man of few words, and ever fewer possessions. His stature is rather laid back and relaxed, despite his tense nature. He stands proudly, ready to present at a moments notice, yet seems to have bravery of that to a mouse.

He always seems to be lost in thought, or lost in the moment. With a smile on his face at almost all times, he can't help but make people curious to who he is and how he works. Often seen wearing an open jacket and a tight shirt or tank top, his figure is always present. He can't help but dress comfortably, as well as fashionably.

Even if his history is that of a samurai, he appears to be more like a fencer. Wearing designer clothing, he has grown accustomed to those of high class, and often blends in with their society instead of his own money deprived culture. He is nothing but a wolf in sheep's clothing.


Personality: Reserved, pensive and cautious, Valiance lacks self-confidence and hides behind a veil of icy detachment, an attitude that could easily be mistaken for contempt when in fact he is an extremely sensitive soul! It is only with time and patience that he will make progress in life and become more sociable. With a motto of "Slow and Steady Wins the Race" is is one to take his time for things. His insecurity coupled with feelings of inferiority means that he is inclined to worry and doubt and he is certainly rather wary of the unknown and the unexpected. While he is something of a loner he nonetheless very much enjoys the company of others, which he finds energizing, and is therefore attracted to associations and collaborations.  He is profoundly interested in psychology, ethnology and ecology as well as countless other areas of knowledge. With him everything is possible, from apparent loss of enjoyment in life to great enthusiasm and he is a true emotional bulimic, where both his personal and professional lives are concerned. A loving relationship is important to him and his well-being, and he could make an excellent father who is capable of great understanding, once he has reached emotional maturity, that is. Unless he decides, like Peter Pan, that he doesn´t want to grow up, in which case he will remain an eternal child who will seek a woman who is also prepared to mother him. He harbors a comical personality when he is talking or fighting against his opponents. He seeks to protect the few that carry the name of his clan and those that are his brothers in arms.
Motivations: He wishes to find a world without fear, crime, or poverty. He wants everyone to enjoy themselves to the fullest and live life the same.
- Spiders, he fucking despises the little creatures
- The sound of creaking metal, while the noise itself is nothing, it's the visuals of possible massacre that scares him.
- Dying in his Sleep, he wants to die fighting, and to be killed in his sleep only makes him a wimp in his own eyes.
- Velvet, A girl he is kinda obsessed with
- Silk, it's just so soft
- Food, because food is awesome
- Stories, who doesn't like a good story?
- Talking to people, he hates trying to start conversation
- Uncooked food, just . . .just get out.
- Cliffhangers, He hates being lead on.
Positive Characteristics: [+12]
- Regeneration (+4)
- High Society (+2)
- Alertness (+2)
- Blindsight (+4)
Negative Characteristics: [-12]
- Compulsive Honesty (-2)  
- Judgmental (-1)
- Intolerance (-1) [Rudeness]
- Cowardly (-2)
- Fanaticism (-1)
- Insanity:Generalized Anxiety Disorder (-3)
- Dark Secret (-1) [His past]
- Amnesia (-1)

Magic: Spirit of The Samurai
Type: Holder
Element: Spiritual [No Element]
Description: Spirit of the Samurai (사무라이 정신 Wǔshì ui Sīngshén) is a magic that utilizes the user's lineage. This magic is based around channeling the user's energy and magic through various tools. Because of this, the magic has a Holder-Like appearance. The preferred tools varies from mage to mage, but the most common choice are swords.

This magic is primarily focused on enchantments, and conjuring spirits to aid them in battle. While the spirits are celestial, they cannot deal damage themselves. However, the spirits can create a variety of objects and enchantments for the caster to use. The items are celestial and spiritual in nature. However, despite the spirits usefulness, the only physical item they can conjure, is the casters single sword, the Katana.

This magic is only obtainable by members of the Ayatsu Clan, or people who have been taught this skill by a member of the Ayatsu Clan.


History: Born a warrior, raised a warrior, all he knew was the sound of his sword hitting flesh. Since he could stand, he held a blade. Since he could walk, he swung a blade. Since he could run, his strikes always hit true. That was his code that he lived by, but even so, remembering who his family was remained a mystery.

He begun aimlessly wandering Fiore for answers, only to find himself in Khora. With empty pockets, he needed to find work, and with his own skill, he found himself in the guard of a wealthy family.

He found himself sharpening blades, wielding armor and molding knives. He wasn't sure what it was all for, or why the family needed such an arsenal, but it fed him and gave him a place to sleep at night.

He would often find himself following curiosity and venturing around the manor. He claimed it was scouting, but he wanted to know what the family was hiding. He needed to know why the wealthy needed an army, but soon, that wasn't what he wanted to know.

From behind a tree, he could see everything he wanted. It was just in sight, and just within reach. He didn't know why, but he knew what he wanted in life. He wanted that girl to be his wife.

He didn't know her name, he didn't know who exactly she was. All he knew was her family paid for him to forge weapons and teach the other men swordsmanship. But it didn't end there.

He would preform his duties, only to watch from the corner of his eye, the girl he loved change into his very dreams. With seconds, he watched her grasp the basics of combat. With minutes, hours, every fraction of the day, he watched, curious to why she chose to learn. He wanted to know what drove her to be the one he loved.

Days would pass, and he would watch not only the expression of the girl change, but the very men he worked with. It was as if something had begun, and it was out of his reach. He had to do something.

But one night, in utter darkness he could hear a voice cry out for help. With nothing but the moon to light his way, he made his way to the mansion. He would open the window of the girl's room. He could smell the fresh blood, but dared not to look. She would lift her hand to him, as if calling for help. He couldn't help but feel wanted and loved. He took her hand.

"Are you here to rescue me?" the sweet girl would ask. Valiance would smile, pulling her towards him. "No. I'm here to kidnap you."

Last edited by Valiance Ayatsu on Fri Feb 19, 2016 2:27 am; edited 6 times in total

2 Re: Valiance Ayatsu on Sat Feb 13, 2016 1:24 pm

Hikaru Nakamura

Gen description is on the short side.

One more fear is needed.

How did you join Eclipse Haven?

3 Re: Valiance Ayatsu on Sat Feb 13, 2016 3:04 pm

Valiance Ayatsu

Changed to guildless.

4 Re: Valiance Ayatsu on Sat Feb 13, 2016 10:56 pm

Hikaru Nakamura

Appearance description is on the short side.

One more fear is needed.

5 Re: Valiance Ayatsu on Sat Feb 13, 2016 11:55 pm

Valiance Ayatsu

Edited. Weee Word count.

6 Re: Valiance Ayatsu on Sun Feb 14, 2016 12:25 am

Hikaru Nakamura

"However, the spirits can create a variety of objects and enchantments for the caster to use." Dang i just now reread this part, and specify what type of objects. Also might have to put this in the other application with his magic. Don't want an Arc of Embodiment type of magic lol.

7 Re: Valiance Ayatsu on Sun Feb 14, 2016 4:27 am

Valiance Ayatsu

It's objects or enchantements.

Like shields to protect the user, or weapons. The spirits hold/house the item. As far as enchantments, it's like aura buffing. I'm not quite sure how to edit the description to fit that . . .

8 Re: Valiance Ayatsu on Sun Feb 14, 2016 11:50 pm

Hikaru Nakamura

"Like shields to protect the user, or weapons. The spirits hold/house the item." Mmm, so basically making items out of thing air? I'm not quite sure what your saying or is it similar to requip?

If i'm just reading it all wrong and the items are made out of aura, just say that the user can manipulate the aura into different shapes to clear it up.

9 Re: Valiance Ayatsu on Mon Feb 15, 2016 2:38 am

Valiance Ayatsu

Is this fine?

10 Re: Valiance Ayatsu on Tue Feb 16, 2016 5:27 pm

Valiance Ayatsu

@Valiance Ayatsu wrote:Is this fine?

11 Re: Valiance Ayatsu on Tue Feb 16, 2016 6:28 pm

Hikaru Nakamura

Sadly the magic is denied since it is deemed a mixture of requip/summoning by the staff.

12 Re: Valiance Ayatsu on Tue Feb 16, 2016 7:00 pm

Valiance Ayatsu

The summons can't even do anything . . . They're just cosmetic. . .

13 Re: Valiance Ayatsu on Tue Feb 16, 2016 10:47 pm

Hikaru Nakamura

Still the Requip concept.

14 Re: Valiance Ayatsu on Wed Feb 17, 2016 4:35 pm

Valiance Ayatsu

Bump? .-.

or nah?

15 Re: Valiance Ayatsu on Fri Feb 19, 2016 12:36 am

Hikaru Nakamura

Change the magic to holder. If there is a sword or item created and it is a physical item then the magic automatically shifts to holder. Because caster's do not receive any weapons.

16 Re: Valiance Ayatsu on Fri Feb 19, 2016 2:27 am

Valiance Ayatsu

Bump. Last time they told me to make it caster, but ok.

17 Re: Valiance Ayatsu on Fri Feb 19, 2016 6:00 pm

Hikaru Nakamura

Sorry for the hard time. Without Further due! welcome to NDRP!

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