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1 Oliver Venus (FINISHED) on Sat Apr 16, 2016 12:27 pm

Oliver Venus


  “Life only stops if you let stop or was that for when your having Fun oh well!”


Name(s): Oliver Venus
Nickname(s): Olly,Oli, and Azure
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Birthday: July 26
Sexuality: Bisexual
Rank: D
Guild: Gryphon Quill
Tattoo: right thigh in blue
Face Claim: OC


Height: 5'8
Weight: 120 lbs
Hair: Short Black hair
Eyes: (Right) brown left (blue)
Description: Oliver/Olly is a tanned boy with one dark brown eye and one Blue eye with messy bed head with small blue top hat with a black cloth tied around it and Blue glasses and a that sit on the tip of the nose. He wears a Blue button up shirt buttoned up to the top button but the bottom is usually not buttoned at all, is normally untucked and a small black bowtie with a black sleeveless vest with three red rose forming a ring stitched onto the back. Oliver normally wears a pair brown zip off cargo shorts with a leather card holder with angle wings on sides of it that he wears on his right side and a much smaller case next to it. Oliver/Olly wears black work boots that go up to his shine’s with the leases normally untied and white ankle socks, he walks with a little skip in each step that he takes.


Personality: Oliver is a very nice boy that likes to help people that need it and just loves to play card games with others but can’t stand losing them at the same time this is mostly due to the fact that thinks like an 8-year-old child even though he is 15 now. He is almost always doing something that in values moving around as he is always eating something with sugar or just sugar itself because he likes the way it teasts and he goes about his day not really letting to much bother him but the things that should bother him just fly over his head. Oliver does not have the best hand eye quotation when he runs or walks which is why he falls and trips over things/people all the time, he can also be every peaceful when he’s running low on sugar or really sleepy but mostly when he’s sleepy. He can be easily bought by anything with sugar or looks sugary to him which is how his aunt got him to work most days. Oliver can act his age when he wants but most of the time he just chose not to due to the fact that he likes being young.

Motivations: His drive to protect his friends and loved ones from anyone that would do them any type of harm and so he never knos the feeling of losing them
Fears: Dragon Slayers (due to the fact that he grew up with stories of how Dragon Slayers were killers and eat people.)

Likes: His Arcana, Sweets, and animles

Dislikes: Abousing Arcanas, Sleep,Dragong Slayers

Positive Characteristics:
-Swift +3
-Deceitful +2
-Persuasive +2
-Zealot (throwing knifes) +4

Negative Characteristics:
-Clumsiness -1
-Curiosity -1
-Lazy -1
-Short Attention Span -1
-Talkative -1
-Vulnerable -3
-Hedonistic -1
-Compulsive Honesty (-2)


Magic: Arcana Cards Magic
Type: Arcana deck Holder type magic  
Classes: Offensive, Defensive, and Healing
Element: None

Description: Simulaer to Celestial Spirit magic but uses the 22 Arcana to aid their user in battle, each Arcana has it's use in battle some of are ment for Defenseive moves and others are More Offensive  and then their are the small few that provied healing. All the Arcana have their own magic that they can use

Weaknesses: Each Arcana spirit has it's own Magic limit and each spirit has a link with there user which allows the to feel and the user to feel what they do to a certen extant.


History: Oliver or Olly was born in a small village in Fiorea where his parents raised him until they sent him to go live with his uncle and aunt in Accadia. When he moved in with his Uncle and Aunt he was only 6 but that didn’t matter to them as they had owned a magic tool shop and put Olly straight too work by making him check the inventory and make delivery’s but after he finished whatever he was told to do his Uncle gave him his father’s old Arcana Cards that he left in his care.  Oliver was a natural at using the cards and the reason for this is that he was able to summon the magician which he gave the nick name Mad Hatter although his Aunt wanted him to keep away from any and all things magic he asked his uncle to show him how to use the cards correctly which he had no problem with.   When Oliver turned 10 he had already learned how to summon the Arcana’s and keep them out for long periods of time but one day his aunt found him and his uncle practicing and took the cards away without even letting him explain himself. His aunt hid the cards from him for five months which made him go crazy he felt as if he lost part of his soul without the cards, one day as he was on his way to deliver some tools he collapsed half way there and the drop off when he woke up he was back at his uncle’s place with no memory of how he got back their until his aunt tells him that one of the cards brought him back. five years later Oliver gained permission from his parents along with his aunt and uncle to take the cards and go on adventures to do the one thing his father could never do which was find all 22 Arcana Card spirits seeing how he already had 4 cards with him. Oliver set out a few days later to join a guild but seeing how he had lived in a city with one he didn’t have to go very far but before he went to the guild he decided to make a detour and see if he was ready. One week later Oliver saw a flyer saying Gryphon Quill was looking for new guild members so without a second thought he rushed back to the city.

Last edited by Oliver Venus on Fri Apr 29, 2016 11:44 pm; edited 10 times in total

2 Re: Oliver Venus (FINISHED) on Sat Apr 16, 2016 1:14 pm


Why hello there and welcome to NDRP!

My name's Sayuno, I'm a moderator and I'd like to help you out.

I need you to follow these 4 easy steps to have your application approved!

  1. Copy the template and replace your current post with it!
  2. Change the thread name to the name of your character! Put a "wip" next to it, as long as this app isn't finished! Your thread title would be: "Oliver Venus - WIP"
  3. Fill out the template, make sure you fill it out properly. Use a wordcounter to be sure you have enough words for personality, history, appearance ect.
  4. Bump this app once this is completed, remove the "wip" in the title and replace it with a "Finished"!

That's it - here's the template for you:

    [appearance here, max 500px width]


[b]Name(s):[/b] (Full name)
[b]Nickname(s):[/b] (Self-explanatory)
[b]Age:[/b] (Self-explanatory)
[b]Gender:[/b] (Self-explanatory)
[b]Birthday:[/b] (Month and day)
[b]Sexuality:[/b] (Self-explanatory)
[b]Rank:[/b] D
[b]Guild:[/b] (Choose a guild or go with none. Read the Guild Pages to make sure you meet the requirements of the guild you're interested in)
[b]Tattoo:[/b] (Where is your tattoo located? If you're not in a guild, where would your tattoo be if you were in a guild?)
[b]Face Claim:[/b] (Full name character and show it belongs to)


[b]Height:[/b] (Self-explanatory)
[b]Weight:[/b] (Self-explanatory)
[b]Hair:[/b] (Self-explanatory)
[b]Eyes:[/b] (Self-explanatory)
[b]Description:[/b] (General description of their appearance in 150 words or more)


[b]Personality:[/b] (Describe their personality in 200 words)
[b]Motivations:[/b] (What motivates your character)
[b]Fears:[/b] (What does your character fear? If you want silly fears, come up with at least three)
[b]Likes:[/b] (What does your character like)
[b]Dislikes:[/b] (What does your character dislike)
[b]Positive Characteristics:[/b]
[*]Please visit the regulations and view the characteristics. Users are allowed to choose up to 12 points in positive characteristics but in return must compensate by choosing the exact amount or higher in negative characteristics. Feel free to use less points. Simply copy paste the characteristics and use a bullet for each one.
[b]Negative Characteristics:[/b]
[*]Please visit the regulations and view the characteristics. Users are allowed to choose up to 12 points in positive characteristics but in return must compensate by choosing the exact amount or higher in negative characteristics. Feel free to use less points. Simply copy paste the characteristics and use a bullet for each one.


[b]Magic:[/b] (Name)
[b]Type:[/b] (Caster or holder?)
[b]Classes:[/b] (Choose up to three: Offensive, Defensive, Buff, Debuff, Healing, Supplementary)
[b]Element:[/b] (Which element is the magic aligned to? If none simple state none)
[b]Description:[/b] (Describe what the magic does. Check out the banned magic list to be sure that you're not describing a banned or restricted magic with a different name.)
[b]Weaknesses:[/b] (Describe the weaknesses of the magic.)


[b]History:[/b] (Describe the character's history in 400 words up till now)

3 BUMP on Thu Apr 28, 2016 12:51 am

Oliver Venus

Finished it i hope

4 Re: Oliver Venus (FINISHED) on Thu Apr 28, 2016 11:33 am


Alright, first at all I need a link to a picture you would like to use as a FC!

I need you to be a liiiiittle bit more detailed with your motivations please.

Characteristics: You have 11 positive traits but only 9 negative. you need at least 2 more negative ones!

You might wanna run this through a spell check as well. I'll fix the coding for you, thats all I can find.

5 Re: Oliver Venus (FINISHED) on Thu Apr 28, 2016 5:12 pm

Oliver Venus


Sorry just wanted to make sure

6 Re: Oliver Venus (FINISHED) on Sat Apr 30, 2016 12:19 pm


You can join the Quill

7 Re: Oliver Venus (FINISHED) on Sat Apr 30, 2016 1:44 pm



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