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1 Dylan Christensen on Thu Apr 28, 2016 7:22 am

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Actually, he doesn't like you. Maybe he never even wanted to hear about you, in all probability, maybe he hates you.


GENERAL INFORMATION

Name(s): Dylan Christensen.
Nickname(s): The Lone Wolf | Deathstroke.
Age: 22.
Gender: Male.
Birthday: January 1.
Sexuality: Heterosexual.
Rank: D
Guild: Alabaster Wolves.
Tattoo: Right Shoulder Blade - Golden with Blue outline.
Face Claim: Takumi Usui - Kaichou wa Maid-Sama!

APPEARANCE

Height: 186.5 centimetres.
Weight: 75 kilograms.
Hair: Blonde.
Eyes: Bright Green.
Description: Dylan is slightly taller than the average and is the typical 'Cutiepie' for women. He has spiky blonde hair which are silky, glossy and really soft! Your hands won't get caught in a place in his hair. He has bright green eyes, full of enthusiasm and wonder, they are really bright. His jaw is strong along with his teeth which are dazzling and white and are lined up, not a teeth in an imperfect position, and has adequate eyelashes. His body is perfectly shaped and chiseled and is slender yet muscular, he has 8 packs. His body is pure muscles, and there is excess or bodily fat, you can say he is one of the best people out there with that shape of their bodies, Well bodily hair is something he might lack you know, he doesn't have hair even in the damn armpits! He waxed them up, and due to something, they have never grown back, Oh it hurt. His face is always cleanly shaved with a decent haircut excluding his hair out front. His biceps triceps are all decent ; his quads and calve muscles too. He is a overall handsome and perfectly shaped man. Most of the girl that see him fall for him instantly, resulting in many broken hearts. With a vanilla skin tone, he is the guy that you dream of. (NPC, or if you want a PC can too, you know what I mean.) But his only minus is that he has a prosthetic metal arm (only for cosmetics) which he usually keeps covered with sleeves.

PERSONALITY

Personality: Imagine the quiet, lonely wallflower in a school, that perfectly describes Dylan in all his Mercenary glory. Though he is not timid, he really doesn't talk and is really unsociable to describe him. But he wants the people to notice him, being the newest wolf in the pack, he will constantly try to impress the Guildmaster (also his cousin) Hikaru when he would get a chance. For example he will climb to the top of Mount Everest and shout at the top of his voice "I am special! Dylan Christensen is something special!". Though he adores making friends, he fears that they will hate him for some reasons, though a handsome and confident looking person, he is a loner for no good reason, it is just because he fears being around people of a certain category which are the Dark Mages, he fears being around them but not in battle. In battle he will tear them apart if he can.

Dylan is a daredevil and so he cannot refuse the chance of engaging in battle with anyone who he senses is stronger than him cause it gives him his kick and if he loses, it results into his ego being hurt, that also really bad. He is an adventure freak and everything that gives him kick is his pleasure. All that aside, he is a brilliant and intelligent genius of the upper kind. Dylan's intelligence quotient is 225 (Equal to Terrence Tao), being a practical being, even if he rushes into the battle, he will use everything he can find to his advantage being a tactical genius and a brilliant general along with it comes his practical mind. Dylan is a master crafter and can build pretty much everything from anything.

For every person that knows him like a friend, he's the best to them, he will try to help that person in every way and behave cheerfully to them in a friendly, bliss and joyous manner and would not try to hurt them, he would protect them where he could and try to keep them away from trouble, as he is all the time silent and calm one. Overall, he is a really lovable and charming guys. He has really charming ways, that of a gentlemen.

Motivations:



  • True justice: He wants to bring justice to the masses, the people need justice and justice must be served. He has the heroic appeal on himself, he wants to give people what they need, what they desperately do need, He thinks criminals as of scums that need a bashing and thrashing. He has a dream that one day all criminals will be behind bars, rotting like tomatoes.

  • True knowledge: He wants to attain what is known as true knowledge ; Knowledge is above all, he wants something of value and knowledge really is of value.







Fears:



  • Cats: Disgusting creatures, Dylan hates them the most. They are sneaky, steal things, unloyal and hateful. Their claws scare him, their teeth scare him more, and their bites scares him to death. He certainly fears them.

  • Failure: He doesn't want to lose to anybody, failure is a fear to him, a disgrace to him. He doesn't want to lose, nobody does want to anyways. He fears losing because; he might be discarded by people for that.







Likes:



  • Fights: He loves getting into fights even if against foes considerably stronger than him. The thing is that his own habit of daredevilness gets him into trouble more often than none.

  • Music: He mostly prefers classical music, but rock might work out sometimes for him. He does it as a time pass.

  • Adventure: He loves adventures, they are part of his daily routine, sometimes they get him into trouble, but the feeling is undeniable.








Dislikes:


  • Dirty people: People dirty at mind and body alike are disliked by Dylan, he hates lack of personal hygiene, at the same  time he hates perverts and wicked people as they have cost him so much till now.

  • Cats: They might be cute creatures, but he hates them for the reason he fears their claws and everything.

  • Evil: He hates evil people, wicked people. They have cost him so much and they ought to hurt the world, his mission is true justice and he will attain it.







Positive Characteristics:


  • Regeneration (+4): You heal very fast inside and outside of combat. Small cuts that go up to one inch deep are healed in the next post.
    Explanation: C-rank damage healed every post.

  • Diligent (+2): Your meticulousness allows you to analyze minute details that others miss.
    Explanation: Reduces training cost of spells by 10% in word cost.

  • Swift (+3): You are fleet of foot. When running, you move faster than most people.
    Explanation: C-rank speed buff passive.


    High Society (+2): You know good manners and were trained to handle social interactions in noble circles. This is useful in requests involving members of the highest levels of society, such as monarchs, nobles, courtiers, lords and ladies, and high-ranking clerics.
    Explanation: You are capable of having threads with nobles. Those without this feat cannot.












Negative Characteristics:



  • Allergies (-1): You are afflicted with allergies. These may be something as simple as hay fever, but the reactions to such will result in something like a huge bout of sneezing and gasping. You must mention this allergy in your character application.
    Explanation: Whenever this allergy comes into play you must suffer the consequences. The allergy must be something that can actually come and not something strange and unique (Cat-hair)

    Curiosity (-1): You're a naturally curious person and you find mysteries of any sort irresistible. In most circumstances, alas, your curiosity overrides your common sense. This forces you to investigate something unusual, even if it looks like it might be dangerous.
    Explanation: You will walk deeper into the forest you have never been before. You won't turn around from the castle that you have never seen. This can result into getting you into very dangerous situation.

    Phobia (-3): A character afflicted by a phobia persistently fears a particular object or situation. She realizes that the fear is excessive and irrational, but the fear is disturbing enough that she avoids the stimulus.
    Explanation: Character is unable to face anything that has it's fear. If you're afraid of spiders and someone uses spider magic, you flee. (Cats)

    Intolerance (-1): You have an irrational dislike of a certain thing. It may be an animal, a class of person, a situation, or just about anything at all. Note that some dislikes may be too trivial or ridiculous to count--a dislike of Bavarian-crème-filled donuts or mechanical pencils, for example, has no real dramatic value and will not be allowed.
    Explanation: You must act very disgusted and displeased when your dislike comes into play. (Cats)

    Daredevil (-2): You only really feel alive when you're staring death in the face. Your character is addicted to the thrill of death-defying stunts, pushing themselves to the limit at every available opportunity.
    Explanation: You can't refuse the opportunity of engaging into combat with anyone or anything that is stronger than you. You also always volunteer and perform tasks that have a risk attached to them when you are in a group.



    Righteous (-1): The end justifies the means. You are willing to perform morally repugnant actions in order to achieve noble goals. Unfortunately, this can alienate those people who might support your cause if you didn't use such heavy-handed methods.
    Explanation: Your beliefs guide you so strongly that you are willing to kill an entire village that's harboring a thief, if it kills the thief too.

    Extravagant (-2): You enjoy living in the lap of luxury. Ale is never good enough if you can get fine wine instead. You aren't happy with anything less than the finest room in the inn. In addition, any equipment or services you purchase cost 10% more than the standard rate for the locale you are currently in. The best of the best always costs more, after all.
    Explanation: You will always pay 10% more when purchasing something.











MAGIC

Magic: Cosmic Magic.
Type: Caster.
Classes: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary.
Element: Light.
Description: It is a Magic in which the caster is able to manipulate and utilize light in various ways. Occasionally, a certain technique, usually involving the hands, is used to cast a Light spell. When used for offense, the Magic can take the form of a sphere-like object that can be ejected at the opponent or as a beam that can be blasted.Light can also be emitted from the caster's body; depending on the brightness or heat that the light emits, it can be capable enough to blind an enemy or cause the surroundings to explode. Light Magic can also be manifested for multiple usage in defense.

Mar-Vell's version of light magic is known as Cosmic Magic, which controls the objects of the space, different in nature, it alters the physics of light magic and turns it into heavenly matter which is used for offense, defense and supplementary.

Weaknesses: Darkness magic is probably the only magic that stands in this magic's way, if they are clashed against one another, they will cancel out each other. Also a D-Rank Darkness spell is enough to cancel out a C-Rank Light spell.


HISTORY

History:



"It was the best of times,
It was the worst of times,
It was the age of wisdom,
It was the age of foolishness,
It was the epoch of belief,
It was the epoch of incredulity,
It was the season of Light,
It was the season of Darkness,
It was the spring of hope,
It was the winter of despair."


- Charles Dickens, A Tale of two Cities.



Birth Arc: The Origins


Dylan had a really sad and tragic past, his happiness did never really last long. Dylan was born in Crocus to a Billionaire Businessman Alexander Christensen and Lois Christensen. Those two were living parents and would provide everything that Dylan needed; only things of his need, not looking to spoil him, things he desperately. Though they were loving; they were very strict of his manners, and so the first thing he learned was good manners. He was also trained in what he showed potential in such as programming, hacking, piano, violin etc. Magic was something he showed talent, from a young age he was taught how to utilize his magic for the best. He excelled at everything he did even if he was just 4. He was then sent to school at 5, which consisted of 7 periods a day, after recess they will be thought magic there, Dylan made honor rolls every year, it was just basics though.

At 11, he joined a rather special academy (like a boarding school) and was only allowed to come home when there were national holidays, summer breaks or Christmas, he would call them when he would get a chance. Then he returned at the age of 13 from there. He then enrolled in high school, reaching there he enlisted for the magic program, while at the same time he received secondary cause the program was held after school, to help the children master their magic abilities. He was always on so top of his game, that no one would even talk to him, resulting him becoming a loner and a wallflower, he was considered so freaky that no girl would even talk to him, despite him being charming and handsome.


The Arc of Gloominess: Transformation


At 15, Dylan returned from school, graduated from it, with honors. He then started to go with his father on business deals, they ended up successful every time they went, business was growing really well, now his father's name was a household name (not his) and there was a retail shop of his father, in every corner of a city. He was now used to luxury. Until, they went on the business deal. It ended up being successful, but when they returned home.

Dylan opened the gate for his father, happiness could be seen on their faces, they were smiling with joy because this deal was a Golden hen, then when they turned away from staring at each other in father and son love, a scene of horror befall them, his mom lay on the floor with her fingers cut and hair torn from places, a bullet wound on her temple with a dagger in her stomach and she looked like she was raped, yes she was. Dylan shrunk to his knees, tears gushing out of his eyes, his head tilted in shame. His father standing on his feet in tears, shocked about what happened

Boom.

A bullet hit his father's forehead and when Dylan turned his head to see, it was an assassin with a sniper, a female assassin rather, a beautiful bitch. He then in anger, rushed above the stairs while the woman was reloading the gun, he reached in time and grabbed the woman by her neck and said "Who the fuck send you here?" it was the first time he had sweared. But before he could get his answer, he was knocked by a hit on the head by the other assassin.


Nightmare with Shadows


He woke up in a large building, surrounded by women if to say assassins rather. He was sexually abused by them, his charm and handsome physique and face cost him, he was touched..everywhere. Raped (Female to Male rape, as in without the boy's consent. Not with a Dildo, just you know.) while tied to a pole in turns, four or five days passed like these, he became seriously scarred. He had enough of this, one day he gathered courage, nobody had came today.

He stood up, slowly still tied to the pole, and tried walking away from it, slowly but it was no use, he used all his force, still no use. Then he found a knife at the bottom of his feet, left by a careless female, he sat down and tried to pick it up with his feet and succeeded in it, he then took it up on his right hand and cut the rope, and then ran, but he wanted revenge, vengeance. There was dynamite around, he then took dynamite and planted it around the building, and then ran again, a female saw him, and grabbed his left arm, restricting him from running, but he ran so fast that his arm got ripped because of the strong grip, while he was in pain, he ran for his life, with just few seconds left, he escaped by jumping outside while tailed by females trying to kill him, the building, killing hundreds of them, each of them to be exact. He then by a walking trip, still in pain traveled towards Crocus. To his father's mansion, which was now to be his. He reached in time, and before he died of pain. Collapsing in front of the gate, he was noticed by his personal butler who was still there, for the servants they took with them were not killed as they hid. He took him to a hospital in a hurry to get his treated.

Dylan woke up on a hospital, covered by his relatives or what was left of them, he then took a look at his left side, where he saw his prosthetic metal arm, polished with chrome, it did look good though, but not really was it good. In a few weeks, he was discharged from the hospital and returned home, but he had enough of this life. He left after telling his butler that his uncle should take over. The butler tried to stop him, but O would Dylan really stop? He had decided to travel the world and he left after hearing about a guild named Alabaster Wolves, whose guildmaster was his cousin on the paternal side. He traveled to Valderice and then joined Alabaster Wolves, he had decided that he would live a new life, in service of justice, knowledge. From a new tomorrow.

P.S He does return to the mansion when he is in Crocus, his uncles live in it now.



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2 Re: Dylan Christensen on Tue May 03, 2016 8:18 am

Dylan

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Humpty Dumpty Bumpty Bump.

3 Re: Dylan Christensen on Tue May 03, 2016 9:32 am

Evangeline

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Ok, I think this is good to be pre-approved. Please wait for an official mod to approve you ^^

4 Re: Dylan Christensen on Tue May 03, 2016 10:06 am

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Okay, we talked about this before but I don't think I got my point across. The App in itself is perfectly fine, however there is a huge problem with your history. You need to stick to the Fairyverse.

I need you to completely remove that fictional world out of your history. That includes all names regarding other countries ect, being ageless, galaxies, and all kind of strange, magical fancy stuff like the mirror you mentioned ect ect.

First and foremost, you should be from Fiore, Earthland. If you don't want to be from Fiore, that is okay but you need to leave unmentioned - such as Krea and Kree and all that good stuff. I'll give you some examples on what is not possible here unfortunately:

@Dylan wrote:Mar-Vell was born into an forbidden place in Earthland and the Galaxy, it was placed in Earthland towards the north pole which was a hidden away place protect by a giant mirror from invaders, Nobody could travel there and nobody could travel out of there, Known as "Kree". It had two countries and Capital, the capital was the biggest city of the countries. The first country was known "Krea" and it's capital was known as the "Krea City". The second country was known as "Skrull" and it's capital was known as "Skrull City".

@Dylan wrote:
War broke out, the Skrulls were wicked ones, they broke into the Krea camps, and slaughtered them mercilessly, Mar-Vell's friends were killed in front of him, he could do nothing but watch. He had enough of it, he took a Sword and went out on a rampage, killing every Skrull that came to his sight with his sword, slaughtering them, the whole army got motivated and fought back against them, the day was theirs now.

@Dylan wrote:Normally, being a deity he would heal against these fast, but they were special arrows made by the witches from magical potions, as Mar-Vell was a celestial and cosmic being, his death caused a rip in the space-time continuum resulting into a severe blackhole which only sucked him in, his wounds was healed, but his powers were gone. This blackhole threw him into Earthland, in one certain country called Fiore, he deprived of his powers was now a weakling and surprisingly it cost him 313 years to travel from there to Earthland, but he didn't age, he became ageless. He tried to fight crime, but he cannot, he only had his power, but not his strength, he was weak, pathetic. He decided he would become stronger and protect humanity from danger.

Now, I believe you put a lot of work into your history so this is a very unfortunate moment. From now on, please feel free to contact me before you put up any strange stuff that MIGHT not be approved - feel free to look at other people's histories to get an idea.

Bump when the changes are made.

5 Re: Dylan Christensen on Wed May 04, 2016 10:57 am

Dylan

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This good now?

6 Re: Dylan Christensen on Thu May 05, 2016 10:15 am

Dylan

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Bump? Please I atleast need a suggestion of if this is cool?

7 Re: Dylan Christensen on Thu May 05, 2016 10:44 am

Sayuno

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Chill, I was busy. You gotta give me at least a few days lol.

8 Re: Dylan Christensen on Mon May 09, 2016 4:51 am

Dylan

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I am Done, again. Please if you can clear the messages that come before, so that this looks cleaner. Also I have acquired permission from Hikaru to join the Nakamura clan and from LeeAnn too and maybe he meant the guild too..

Hikaru wrote:MM, I'm okay with it! Just check with my sister Lee-Ann and that would be fine!

Leeann wrote:Cousin is fine. As long it's not sibling you're cool. If your open to a new topic I a in Darveo or the town that starts with a D. I will be slow this coming week due to finals.

Welcome to the herd. Appreciate you telling me about this lol haven't been on much to know what that brother of mine is doin' haha

9 Re: Dylan Christensen on Mon May 09, 2016 6:18 am

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I'll check this later today or tomorrow. Also, if you want to join Hikas guild you should put "Alabaster Wolves" and not guildless up there! ^^

10 Re: Dylan Christensen on Mon May 09, 2016 1:09 pm

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