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1 Jintai Moya [Done] on Wed May 11, 2016 8:57 am

Kharen




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“Whether my hands are stained blood red or pure as the white snow, as long as my name is heard I have won.”

GENERAL INFORMATION

Name(s): Jintai Moya
Nickname(s): Mr.Savage
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Birthday: October 1st
Sexuality: Straigth
Rank: D
Guild: None
Tattoo: Location: Back, Color: Black
Face Claim: Kaneki Ken [Tokyo Ghoul]
Reference: None

APPEARANCE

Height: 5'7 feet
Weight: 155 pounds
Hair: White
Eyes: Red
Description: Jintai is a tall young man standing at 5'7 feet and weighs around 155 pounds in lean muscle. His body is quite lean yet extremely muscular with pasty white skin that is extremely smooth and not rugged in the least. His face is triangular shaped with a small sharp jawline. He has crimson red angular eyes with a long slightly protruded nose giving him a innocent look with his small ears. He has a full set of thick short white hair in long strands that is curly and wild that reaches down to around his nose. Across his right eye a long jagged scar is there and his right eye has no color.

Jintai wears a mask with with a eye patch and a open set of teeth that has a zipper attacked to it. It covers his entire face from the nose down and his right eye. He wears a black skintight sleeveless shirt underneath a black trench coat. For pants he wears all black pants that are fairly snug with black mini combat boots that have the top cut out leaving his toes exposed.

PERSONALITY

Personality: Jintai is a seemingly quiet person but that is not the case.Jintai is the silent type who doesn't generally express his mood through facial expressions but mainly through his actions. Especially his effortless attempts with his lecherous tendencies. It tends to make him seem quite weird at times as he'll be acting hyperactive possibly with a face of stone making the whole situation awkward. Jintai is naturally a kind person despite being selfish at heart. This part always is always conflicting making some decisions hard for him to make. Like to kill a enemy who helped him out or steal from someone who took care of him when he really needs it. But mostly in the end his own selfish nature takes over. This is either do to the fact money is involved, they pissed him off with one of his dislikes or even if they end up going against his beliefs. He also has quite the habit of insulting these people through fruit insults.

When Jin interacts with people he his is straight forward and to the point 87% of the time. It will seem as if he lacks any humanity at all but he is only this way with people he doesn't know on a personal basis. When he does know someone on a personal basis he is more open on his opinion and will keep up his natural cool demeanor and not be afraid to knock some sense in to them if he gets pissed off. Another part of Jin is his anger and since he is a man of action and few words he tends to get a little violent when he's angry. Jin is prone nearly going all out with killing intent if possible. Against his friends or allies just enough to make them double over but a enemy or someone who he doesn't know he's not afraid to kill them even.In actual combat Jin is level headed and always trying to get the better of his opponent. This gung-ho nature makes him ready to take on anyone and anything at anytime.

Despite this evil side Jin is also very sweet and thoughtful to those close to him. While he may not dive to take a knife to them he would do all in his power avenge them and have their back all the way.However if it ever surely endangered his own life it's very possible he would leave them for death if need be even if it made him feel horrible on the inside. But to him rather their life then his. That is the carefree attitude Jin has and acts upon. Not to mention his carefree attitude gets the better as him as he is extremely careless and never able to capture anything alive. Even more he can't help but shout out his attack names and carelessly forget important things when trying to explain them.

Motivations: Money: Jintai at his core is a greedy and self pursing person and money happens to be one of things he wants to pursue and gain. With a lot of money he can build and accomplish those certain things you can't with magic. Not to mention he grew up in a poor background making him want to strive to attain as much money as possible with own two hands.

Power: Not only did his background cause a urge to become rich but becoming the strongest is also another desire of Jintai as he fears becoming weak and powerless and thus wants to attain as much power as possible and defeat strong and great opponents.

Fears: Losing: As such with a burning desire to gain power and win losing is always a constant fear for Jintai as he feels that if he loses he will be weak and most likely die off nothing more as he started out which was trash.

Giant Insects: As a child Jintai had a run in with a giant centipede that hunted him for days on end tormenting him and permanently scarring him for life. To do this he will go crazy and try to instantly kill whatever giant insect lands in his sight.
Likes: Women: Jintai has a deep love for sexy women of all kinds as a typical man who is lost to his carnal desires. There is no stopping him in the presence of a beautiful lady as such.

Training: Every time Jintai trains it is a chance to improve himself as he can become more powerful with his physical and magic training to conquer whatever enemies he will face.

Fighting: His dream is to become world renowned in the world and this can only be done through taking on strong opponents and either defeating them or beating them down completely. He will stop at nothing to take on the world and bring all who step in his way.
Dislikes:Proud People: Jintai can't stand someone who believes their all high and mighty especially when they aren't all that. He has a bad habit of accidentally injuring these type of people and or property around him. Nearly being around them causes hatred and disgust and the urge to purge.

Flat girls: Jintai has a deep desire for women of a large variety however any and all who are flat and have the body of a ironing-board are completely unattractive and hideous to his eyesight.

Positive Characteristics:

  • Acrobatic (+3): You have excellent body awareness and coordination.
    Explanation: Character can perform flashy moves such as back flips, cartwheels and various other moves when dodging an attack.

  • Alertness (+4): You have finely tuned senses.
    Explanation: Passive D Rank hearing, sight, and smell buffs.

Negative Characteristics:

  • Harbinger of Ill Omen (-1): You seem to be cursed to forever bump into a specific person, time and time again. Each time you do, something bad happens not long afterward. This person in no way does this purposefully, it just happens with alarming frequency.
    Explanation: You will have character assigned to you by roleplay department of staff who will enter you threads randomly from time to time. When this happens, staff will change the conditions of your thread against you. Such as heavy storm, avalanches or beasts catching onto your smell.

  • Daredevil (-2): You only really feel alive when you're staring death in the face. Your character is addicted to the thrill of death-defying stunts, pushing themselves to the limit at every available opportunity.
    Explanation: You can't refuse the opportunity of engaging into combat with anyone or anything that is stronger than you. You also always volunteer and perform tasks that have a risk attached to them when you are in a group.a

  • Lecherous (-1): You have a lusty nature and a tendency to pursue the pleasures of the flesh. A woman or a man (however your tastes run) is an almost irresistible temptation to you. You give in to these temptations easily.
    Explanation: If fighting or RPing with someone of your sexual preference, you must act lecherous towards them once every three posts.

  • Talkative (-1): You have a problem keeping your plans to yourself. Your ideas are simply so clever that you tell them to other people, so that you can watch their astonishment creep across their faces just before they tell you just how smart you are. Your flaw gets you to reveal your plans or evil scheme to the wrong people. There's nothing to prevent you from dropping them into a deathtrap afterwards, but should they survive, then you've got problems.
    Explanation: You cannot keep a secret, and thus must announce the name of every one of your attacks.


  • Tongue-Tied (-1): This disadvantage comes up whenever you try to discuss anything of importance and relay pressing information and such. You have the tendency to incorrectly state facts, forget or mix up names, and generally say the wrong thing.
    Explanation: Every time you try to explain something to someone, you mix up names, leave things out, and jump around the timeline of how things happened.



  • Careless (-1): For some reason, people always seem to escape your clutches. You don't understand how that's possible. After all, you throw them into your easily escapable deathtraps before leaving them alone with your bumbling guards while you wander away for no apparent reason. You just can't manage to do a great job at anything.
    Explanation: You can never capture a person. This means that any type of request or roleplay involving capturing is out of the question for you. No matter how great you were throughout the roleplay, you will do something that allows the other to escape at the moment supreme.


MAGIC

Magic: Wolf Man
Type: Caster
Classes: Offensive, Buff, Supplementary
Element: None
Description: This magic allows the user to enhance his body to that of superhuman levels in resemblance to that of a wolf with their mana by being able to move while on all fours. They can grant themselves speed, strength, and also senses of a wolf even allowing to move on all fours with buffs. Fangs and claws with high speed attacks and air slashes enhanced with mana for offensive capability.
Weaknesses: This magic pushes the human body to extreme lengths and is extremely taxing. It can't be used for more than 5 post at a time before 3 post break must be taken in between. This three post is reduced to 2 if all 5 post were not used. Spells may only go up to A rank

HISTORY

History: Jintai was alone for as long as he can remember. From what he could pick up off his memories was that he lived with his mother in the slums of Valderice. She died leaving him alone and not even long enough for her to remember her face soon after. Leaving him to fend for himself in his home at the tender age of 7 he worked wherever he could. Finding jobs here and there he barely survived scrapping all the money he could to survive. At once point in his life at the age of 10 was Jintai introduced to magic when a leader of a group of other kids his age decided to pick on him. Beat up and left for dead a man stumbled upon him who took him to a inn and tended to his wounds. Upon waking up the man explained to Jintai the events in which came to be as he made him a proposition. He promised to teach Jintai the art of Wolf Man magic to allow him to become stronger. For the next 4 years the man and Jintai trained increasing his physical ability and magic skills with the occasional quest to test his skills. During one of these quest Jintai was forced to hunt down a giant centipede which ended up going entirely wrong as the giant centipede in turn chased him for days on end until in a rage and fear was able to shred the centipede to pieces and slay it. At age 14 and finally done with his training Jintai set out on his own path having been stuck in Valderice most of his life. He set off on his journey for the next four years ending up in perilous events one after another barely escaping with his life and developing his anger and childhood memories. He learned that he was weak in the span of time that was his life and this infuriated him. He wanted to become stronger and this led him on his current Journey but the beginning was reaching the outskirts of Nesso where Jintai met a formidable mage who wielded fire. He of course was a dark mage who when Jintai challenged with a direct attack was defeated and lost his right eye due to a heat blade. The man Jintai would come to know as Alair would introduce him in to the world of dark mages and would open up a new line of work. This is when Jintai decided to dawn a new look.When taking on this new work of the dark mages Jintai got a mask and a new outfit all together and now at 18 years of age is starting out in his new life.



Last edited by Kharen on Thu May 12, 2016 6:36 pm; edited 3 times in total

2 Re: Jintai Moya [Done] on Thu May 12, 2016 10:49 am

Adlet Brave

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Hello Trail mod Adlet coming to help you with your app.

Before I start, I would like to ask that you fix the centering of the page please. I need to be able to tell where stuff is in your magic and the history.

Bump when that is done

3 Re: Jintai Moya [Done] on Thu May 12, 2016 6:21 pm

Kharen


Bump and thank you for taking the time to check my app.

4 Re: Jintai Moya [Done] on Thu May 12, 2016 6:23 pm

Adlet Brave

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Not sure if you see it or not, but its still messed up. Why dont you try to redo this through the template. To me it seems like nothing changed

5 Re: Jintai Moya [Done] on Thu May 12, 2016 6:36 pm

Kharen


Alright I think i finally got it

6 Re: Jintai Moya [Done] on Thu May 12, 2016 7:08 pm

Adlet Brave

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Okay, all look pretty well except for one thing

Weaknesses: This magic pushes the human body to extreme lengths and is extremely taxing. It can't be used for more than 5 post at a time before 3 post break must be taken in between. This three post is reduced to 2 if all 5 post were not used. Spells may only go up to A rank


Weaknesses are more for how it will be weak in battle. Like element weaknesses or maybe area weaknesses. The cooldown things would more be for your spells. This really limits your magic. Are you sure you want to do this. It is also not like since you take this weakness your spells would be stronger either. So I would try to edit this a little.

Bump when done

7 Re: Jintai Moya [Done] on Thu May 12, 2016 7:11 pm

Kharen


Oh I purposely limited myself, The last site was quite a bit boring so I wanted to have a bit more fun. Personally I might struggle until reaching C rank at most.

8 Re: Jintai Moya [Done] on Fri May 20, 2016 12:10 pm

Adlet Brave

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Sorry for the long wait. I guess I will have a mod look at this now

9 Re: Jintai Moya [Done] on Sat May 21, 2016 6:54 pm

Kharen


it's quite alright

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