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1 Ryuichi Shūkurō (Done) on Tue May 17, 2016 6:47 pm

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GENERAL INFORMATION

Name(s): Shūkurō Ryuichi
Nickname(s): Chaser, Reaper, Zinnath
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Birthday: Dec 1
Sexuality: Asexual
Rank: D
Guild: Guildless

Tattoo: Sternum (Amber)
Face Claim: Byakuran (Katekyo Hitman Reborn)
Reference: N/A

APPEARANCE

Height: 182cm
Weight: 69kg
Hair: Ashen White
Eyes: Neon blue
Description: In his youth Ryuichi was depicted as a young boy with spiky white hair and a turbulent personality, mixed with a troubled past, the boy kept living.

Today one could hardly tell that they are the one and the same person, Ryuichi`s hair remains ashen white but appears less spiky, and better kept, when wearing his battle armor his body is covered completly save for his hair (which can sometimes be covered by a hood) His both arms appears mechanical, but is always covered up just as any other part of his body. This is so that he won`t be recognized as easily. He also appears to wear a pair of glasses to cover his eyes and not just when entering a place well lit. (these glasses have night vision, X-ray and heat vision as well as a built in periscope) Ryuichi`s body is fit and always on the ready for his prey, he has natural talent when facing off opponents with high perception and speed.

His body is covered in several scars, the most notable is a scar running down from his stomach, and across his chest up and around his right shoulder.

His palms have built in thrusters which can be used for flight and to incinerate opposition, he likes to use these for crowd control, he can sustain flight only for about three minutes before fuel runs out. He also appears to have thrusters in his elbows as well.

PERSONALITY

Personality:  Shūkurō is a very drawn back kind of guy he does not interact with people often, and when he does talk he speaks from a third perspective, he talks to his enemies mostly when he wants to make them fear for their life, panic or otherwise make them uncomfortable. (and usually from the dark) this often makes the opponent viable for mistakes, thus being easier to eliminate.

Shūkurō is a man of Apathy caring little (or none at all) for the worldly troubles of mortal men (or women), a man constantly on the edge
he is generally seen as a well-mannered, and yet very straightforward individual who prefers getting straight to the point, rather than waste time performing idle tasks.

Blunt and sometimes brutally honest, focused nature has gained him both respect and distrust from most individuals that he has come into contact with. He believes that his involvement in petty social affairs or needless tasks will only wear down on his character, as well as force him to care for a particular issue that could distract him from his own goals or responsibilities. He believes having a clear mind is the key to achieving one's goals more than anything else.

Shūkurō belives in the concept that whatever can`t be seen does not exist, the concept of material existence. And whatever exists is of little consiquence, all the same, basically this makes him indifferent, cold hearted of human emotion, but Shūkurō was not always like that, he had feelings like any other.

Motivations: What motivates Shūkurō is perhaps not the right way to word it, rather an obsession is what motivates him. A cause greater than most humans could comprehend. He wishes to create an Utopia.

A world very different from ours, a world covered in eternal twilight, a world withouth the tyranny of the sun. He calls it Project Auriel. He wishes to find the legend of old, Auriel`s bow, which is said to be able to turn the day into eternal night. This dream motivates him to look for the bow, nothing else matters. (his current motivation after losing his memory)




Fears: As a socially incompetent man Shūkurō fears interacting with people in plain sight (in the light), he also fears closed in spaces as well as being imprisoned.

(Likes:

Spiders
Those he attacks, he likes to stab them in the chest (Compulsion)
Positive thoughts
The Dark
Loneliness
People who get straight to the point.
Seeing Justice served at any cost.

Dislikes:

Positive Feelings towards someone
Being Bored
Cheerful people
The Light
Crowds
Being the center of attention

Positive Characteristics:

  • Stealthy (+3): You are particularly good at avoiding notice. You could be sitting somewhere in a thread at a bar and people wouldn't even notice that you were there.
    Explanation: You are able to blend into a crowd, and those entering threads cannot initiate conversation with you until you speak or state your presence in an obvious matter by doing something that draws the attention of others.

  • Daunting Presence (+2): You are skilled at inducing fear in your opponents.
    Explanation: Players of lesser rank cannot initiate combat against you, but are capable of defending themselves.

  • Athletic (+3): You have a knack for athletic endeavors.
    Explanation: Ability to jump 10 meters in a single bound.

    Blind-Fight (+4): You know how to fight in melee without being able to see your foes.
    Explanation: Self Explanatory.


Negative Characteristics:

  • Aloof (-1): Your manner is cold and unapproachable, distancing you from friends and strangers alike. Your preternatural intelligence lends itself to viewing others as slow-witted and a waste of your precious time. Your charisma is lowered.
    Explanation: You can't act nice to people and you can't make friends easily.

  •  Amnesia (-1): You are unable to remember anything about your past, yourself, or your family. Your life is a blank slate. However, your past may someday come back to haunt you. The rest of the flaws you pick are unknown to your character; over the course of your progress, your character will slowly discover them.
    Explanation: You can't refer to anything about your past. The rest of your flaws or not nulled by this characteristic but rather unknown to your character.

  • Proud (-1): You don't like accepting help from others. If a gift or offer of aid smacks of charity or pity even the slightest bit, you grow indignant and refuse it.
    Explanation: You win 10% less jewels from wheel spins.

  • Overzealous (-1): You are incapable of having a weak opinion. Everything you believe, you believe as if your life depended on it. Everything you don't believe in, you hate with a passion.
    Once in a while your flaw gets you to strongly defend one of your opinions, no matter how inappropriate the time and place, nor what the circumstances of such an outburst may be.
    Explanation: If someone goes against your beliefs, you violently defend the beliefs, even if the person is your ally.

  • Derangement/Insanity (-3): Due to circumstances beyond your control, you are permanently insane. You may have a congenital brain disorder, or perhaps you saw something mortals were never intended to lay eyes upon, and it drove you mad. Choose a Derangement/Insanity for your character from the lists below. Though the list is by no means exhaustive, the following options are ones that have been presented in game terms and that have definable--and most times numerical--penalties.

    Compulsions: The character insists on performing ritual actions, such as touching a doorway at left, right, and top before passing through it. Though she may agree that the actions are senseless, the need to perform them is overpowering.
    Explanation: The character must do their compulsion, regardless of adverse affects--including bodily harm.

  • Dark Secret (-1): You have some sort of secret that, if revealed, would make you an outcast amongst your society and companions. While this secret is on your mind at all times, it will come up in topics only once in a while, but when it does, watch out!
    Explanation: You must think about your dark secret at least one out of ten posts. When things that are relevant to the dark secret are brought up you can't stop thinking about it.

  • Branded (-2): You have fled for a crime committed and now have a prominent brand. You may have been a criminal, a slave, or some other such illicit individual. The brand is such that it cannot be easily covered, and a cursory search reveals it each time. Law enforcement agents of any lawful land will immediately take you into custody if they see the mark, for extradition or imprisonment. It is your choice as to whether or not you were falsely accused of the crime.
    Explanation: You have a visible sign on your body that can not be hidden. This sign reveals itself clearly when you are in the presence of Rune Knights which will allow them to freely arrest you. Every time you get arrested you must pay a fine to the local authorities to get out. Resisting arrest will result into a larger fine.

  • Righteous (-1): The end justifies the means. You are willing to perform morally repugnant actions in order to achieve noble goals. Unfortunately, this can alienate those people who might support your cause if you didn't use such heavy-handed methods.
    Explanation: Your beliefs guide you so strongly that you are willing to kill an entire village that's harboring a thief, if it kills the thief too.

  • Judgmental (-1): You form opinions quickly and change them very slowly. You also have a tendency to judge people on their appearance. A man dressed as a pirate, no matter how gentlemanly, is a scoundrel and a dog as far as you is concerned. A man covered in mud is a peasant, and a woman wearing revealing clothing is a prostitute.
    Explanation: You must act very disgusted and displeased when your dislike comes into play.



MAGIC

Magic: Spider Web Magic
Type: Caster
Classes: Offense, Defense, Supplementary
Element: Shadow
Description: Being able to fling spider web like substance from his wrists to grab onto almost any surface then pull him up or fling an object at his opponent, or possibly grab an object of great intrest and pull it to him. The webbing is extremely versatile in combat. Also very sticky.

This also gives Shūkurō the ability to walk on walls and ceilings, sometimes on all fours, like a spider. It can also be used to block off an route, since the webbing can`t be cut easily most people will have trouble getting past it.

Weaknesses:

While the webbing is very tough material (tougher than steel) if the surface that it clings to is weak or breaks off easily, then the webbing wont stick very well.

HISTORY

History: A a boy was born into a certain village, a very special village, the boy grew over the next seven years and became a mischevous boy pulling pranks on the people of his village, the village was very special in that it generally was composed of people who trained in the shadowy arts of ninjutsu. Shortly on his eight birthday his mother passed away in an accident leaving his father (the village elder) to take care of his troubled son.

By then the boy had already begun his training, a year earlier than most in his age, but it was expected of him, he was the son of Akamai himself after all. Later that year a terrible dragon destroyed the village and everyone perished in the village in a forth night, everyone save for Ryuichi for he was saved by a different dragon. The dragon told him that an evil dragon known as Arusha Gearyu had attacked his
village, the two bonded and it was not long after that the boy was able to smile again, though his loss weighted heavily upon his heart.

This was a time when dragons ruled the world keeping those less fortunate in fear, that day Ryuichi swore he would kill the dragon who murdered his kin. Nevith Zinnath lectured the young boy not to make revenge, altrough he said he would teach him how to protect those he would meet in the future, by teaching the boy dragon slayer magic, he also gave him his name since until now no one had given him a name, for you see names where given to those who graduated from the academy. And he never managed to finish his training. Nevith gave him the name Ryuichi literally meaning: First son of the dragon.

So this is how it went on, in secret Nevith trained his son with purpose to slay other dragons, and train he did. For a few years they banded together, one day something fell from the sky. It was not a dragon, but a rock also known as a meteorite, Ryuichi followed the rock where it had landed, what appeared once a rock was now made of solid steel or some materia kin to that. The materia was tough and extremly resistant to fire. What happened after that was shocking to say the least, a bright light flashed from within the rock and blinded the boy.

When he awoke the next time he awakened inside the meteorite having crashed into the land and withouth any memory of his past life. He was discovered by the masked reapers, who took care of him until he regained his strength, he then joined them unknown of what or who he had been in the past.



Last edited by Ryuichi on Sun Jun 05, 2016 11:29 pm; edited 17 times in total

2 Re: Ryuichi Shūkurō (Done) on Wed May 18, 2016 2:08 am

Sayuno

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Ola! Two things before you write down your history:
- Masked Reapers: Make this an organisation/clan or something like that instead of an actual guild please. Only the guild named in the legend exist.
- Watchers Eye: The guild is about to be destroyed and has no active members, it's better for you to go guildless for now.

Another thing:

Space/Time magic is absolutely banned and you can do nothing along those lines. Please remove it completely and replace it with another magic. Same goes for Gravity Magic.

http://www.natsudragneel.com/t4085-the-banned-and-limited-magics

3 Re: Ryuichi Shūkurō (Done) on Sun May 29, 2016 2:23 am

Sayuno

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That FC is taken by Rosencrantz btw :/

4 Re: Ryuichi Shūkurō (Done) on Sun May 29, 2016 3:15 am

Ryuichi

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Off course he is...

5 Re: Ryuichi Shūkurō (Done) on Sun May 29, 2016 3:26 am

Sayuno

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I'm serious. Please bump this once you've made all changes.

6 Re: Ryuichi Shūkurō (Done) on Sat Jun 04, 2016 2:20 pm

Ryuichi

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No you don`t get it, i was being sarcastic. Bump!

7 Re: Ryuichi Shūkurō (Done) on Sun Jun 05, 2016 11:14 am

Kaelyn

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Hello! I will be pre-reviewing your app.

8 Re: Ryuichi Shūkurō (Done) on Sun Jun 05, 2016 12:04 pm

Kaelyn

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GENERAL INFORMATION
- Please add the color of your guild tattoo.
- Your character starts at D-rank, like everyone else.
- You don’t have to mention your previous membership in an organization.

APPEARANCE
- Please put your image under the title.

PERSONALITY
- Name your Derangement/Insanity trait, and please make it clear.

MAGIC
- Your spider webs cannot be stronger than steel. This might be possible if you reach a very high rank but for now you will have to go with normal spider webs.

HISTORY
- Since we don’t have a year specified on site, it would be better to remove the years in your history.
- Dragons still exist and what you wrote makes your character sound like a very old person. Other than that, it’s fine.

Bump when fixed!

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